master 3ced9e3 5/6: ; * etc/NEWS: improve some recently added entries

[Robert Pluim]

branch: master
commit 3ced9e30dbec66c76745a854d1a0522722ded5e5
Author: Robert Pluim <rpluim@gmail.com>
Commit: Robert Pluim <rpluim@gmail.com>

    ; * etc/NEWS: improve some recently added entries
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 etc/NEWS | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/etc/NEWS b/etc/NEWS
index 7fef21b..c266ddd 100644
--- a/etc/NEWS
+++ b/etc/NEWS
@@ -4208,8 +4208,8 @@ first COUNT file names that match the expression.  The 
same COUNT
 parameter has been added to 'directory-files-and-attributes'.
 
 +++
-** 'count-lines' now takes an optional parameter to
-ignore invisible lines.
+** 'count-lines' can now ignore invisible lines.
+This is controlled by the optional parameter IGNORE-INVISIBLE-LINES.
 
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 ** 'count-words' now crosses field boundaries.
@@ -4229,7 +4229,7 @@ The new optional "," parameter has been added, and
 
 +++
 ** 'parse-time-string' can now parse ISO 8601 format strings.
-These have the format like "2020-01-15T16:12:21-08:00".
+These have a format like "2020-01-15T16:12:21-08:00".
 
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 ** 'make-network-process', 'make-serial-process' ':coding' behavior change.