[Emacs-diffs] /srv/bzr/emacs/emacs-24 r107939: * doc/emacs/fixit.texi (Fixit, Undo): Reword to improve page-breaks.

[Glenn Morris]

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revno: 107939
committer: Glenn Morris <address@hidden>
branch nick: emacs-24
timestamp: Wed 2012-05-02 21:22:38 -0400
message:
  * doc/emacs/fixit.texi (Fixit, Undo): Reword to improve page-breaks.
modified:
  doc/emacs/ChangeLog
  doc/emacs/fixit.texi

=== modified file 'doc/emacs/ChangeLog'
--- a/doc/emacs/ChangeLog       2012-05-01 07:38:15 +0000
+++ b/doc/emacs/ChangeLog       2012-05-03 01:22:38 +0000
@@ -1,3 +1,7 @@
+2012-05-03  Glenn Morris  <address@hidden>
+
+       * fixit.texi (Fixit, Undo): Reword to improve page-breaks.
+
 2012-05-01  Glenn Morris  <address@hidden>
 
        * emacs.texi (@copying): Only print EDITION in the TeX version.

=== modified file 'doc/emacs/fixit.texi'
--- a/doc/emacs/fixit.texi      2012-04-14 08:25:06 +0000
+++ b/doc/emacs/fixit.texi      2012-05-03 01:22:38 +0000
@@ -8,9 +8,9 @@
 @cindex mistakes, correcting
 
   In this chapter we describe commands that are useful when you catch
-a mistake while editing.  The most fundamental command for correcting
-erroneous editing is the undo command @kbd{C-/} (which is also bound
-to @kbd{C-x u} and @kbd{C-_}).  This undoes a single command, or a
+a mistake while editing.  The most fundamental of these commands is
+the undo command @kbd{C-/} (also bound to @kbd{C-x u} and @kbd{C-_}).
+This undoes a single command, or a
 part of a command (as in the case of @code{query-replace}), or several
 consecutive character insertions.  Consecutive repetitions of
 @kbd{C-/} undo earlier and earlier changes, back to the limit of the
@@ -60,7 +60,6 @@
 to @kbd{C-_} because typing @kbd{C-/} on some text terminals actually
 enters @kbd{C-_}.}.  This undoes the most recent change in the buffer,
 and moves point back to where it was before that change.
-
   Consecutive repetitions of @kbd{C-/} (or its aliases) undo earlier
 and earlier changes in the current buffer.  If all the recorded
 changes have already been undone, the undo command signals an error.
@@ -75,7 +74,7 @@
 harmlessly breaks the sequence of undoing; then type @kbd{C-/} to undo
 the undo command.
 
-  On the other hand, if you want to resume undoing, without redoing
+  Alternatively, if you want to resume undoing, without redoing
 previous undo commands, use @kbd{M-x undo-only}.  This is like
 @code{undo}, but will not redo changes you have just undone.