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Re: emacs-27 fda6009: Minor copyedits of Emacs manual
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Stefan Kangas |
Subject: |
Re: emacs-27 fda6009: Minor copyedits of Emacs manual |
Date: |
Tue, 6 Jul 2021 14:30:36 +0200 |
Eli Zaretskii <eliz@gnu.org> writes:
> branch: emacs-27
> commit fda60094a2a686323bcf23439e286f2240cfe737
> Author: Eli Zaretskii <eliz@gnu.org>
> Commit: Eli Zaretskii <eliz@gnu.org>
>
> Minor copyedits of Emacs manual
Thanks for working on improving the manual. One small comment:
> Emacs comes with an introductory online tutorial available in many
> -languages. This book picks up where that tutorial ends. It explains
> -the full range of Emacs's power and contains reference material useful
> -to expert users.
> +languages, and this manual picks up where that tutorial ends. It
> +explains the full range of the power of Emacs, now up to @strong{version
> +27.2}, and contains reference material useful to expert users. It
> +also includes appendices with specific material about X and GTK
> +resources, and with details for users of macOS and Microsoft Windows.
I think the final sentence here could be left out. The appendices
aren't super exciting or important in themselves, and the paragraph as
a whole carries more punch without it. Just my two cents.
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