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[PATCH] doc: Fix various minor typos. |
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Sun, 25 Oct 2020 20:46:57 +0300 (TRT) |
Top level: Add end of line period to menu entry in the node listing.
Invoking 'guix time-machine': Remove duplicate word.
Invoking 'guix environment': As above.
PAM Mount Service: As above.
Running Guix in a Virtual Machine: Remove erroneous hyphen and duplicate word.
diff --git a/doc/guix.texi b/doc/guix.texi
index a8aa2de0a6..6a4dc8ff41 100644
--- a/doc/guix.texi
+++ b/doc/guix.texi
@@ -259,7 +259,7 @@ Programming Interface
* Derivations:: Low-level interface to package derivations.
* The Store Monad:: Purely functional interface to the store.
* G-Expressions:: Manipulating build expressions.
-* Invoking guix repl:: Programming Guix in Guile
+* Invoking guix repl:: Programming Guix in Guile.
Defining Packages
@@ -4422,7 +4422,7 @@ Scheme code that evaluates to a list of channel objects.
@end table
As for @command{guix pull}, the absence of any options means that the
-the latest commit on the master branch will be used. The command
+latest commit on the master branch will be used. The command
@example
guix time-machine -- build hello
@@ -5498,7 +5498,7 @@ Another typical use case for containers is to run
security-sensitive
applications such as a web browser. To run Eolie, we must expose and
share some files and directories; we include @code{nss-certs} and expose
@file{/etc/ssl/certs/} for HTTPS authentication; finally we preserve the
-the @env{DISPLAY} environment variable since containerized graphical
+@env{DISPLAY} environment variable since containerized graphical
applications won't display without it.
@example
@@ -28698,8 +28698,8 @@ The configuration rules that will be used to generate
@file{/etc/security/pam_mount.conf.xml}.
The configuration rules are SXML elements (@pxref{SXML,,, guile, GNU
-Guile Reference Manual}), and the the default ones don't mount anything
-for anyone at login:
+Guile Reference Manual}), and the default ones don't mount anything for
+anyone at login:
@lisp
`((debug (@@ (enable "0")))
@@ -31123,7 +31123,7 @@ decompress with @command{xz -d}, and then you can pass
it to an emulator such
as QEMU (see below for details).
This image boots the Xfce graphical environment and it contains some
-commonly-used tools. You can install more software in the image by running
+commonly used tools. You can install more software in the image by running
@command{guix package} in a terminal (@pxref{Invoking guix package}). You can
also reconfigure the system based on its initial configuration file available
as @file{/run/current-system/configuration.scm} (@pxref{Using the
@@ -31184,7 +31184,7 @@ QEMU and KVM documentation for more info.
@item -drive if=none,file=/tmp/qemu-image,id=myhd
Use our QCOW image, the @file{/tmp/qemu-image} file, as the backing store the
-the ``myhd'' drive.
+``myhd'' drive.
@end table
The default @command{run-vm.sh} script that is returned by an invocation of
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Re: [bug#44224] [PATCH] doc: Fix various minor typos. |
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Tue, 27 Oct 2020 19:03:07 -0400 |
On Sun, Oct 25, 2020 at 08:46:57PM +0300, Lulu wrote:
> Top level: Add end of line period to menu entry in the node listing.
> Invoking 'guix time-machine': Remove duplicate word.
> Invoking 'guix environment': As above.
> PAM Mount Service: As above.
> Running Guix in a Virtual Machine: Remove erroneous hyphen and duplicate word.
Thank you very much for this patch!
I pushed as 729d4ba025bc8556d00041f9af5b6609eeec9d80 after making the
commit message fit our style and correcting another typo:
> @@ -31184,7 +31184,7 @@ QEMU and KVM documentation for more info.
>
> @item -drive if=none,file=/tmp/qemu-image,id=myhd
> Use our QCOW image, the @file{/tmp/qemu-image} file, as the backing store the
> -the ``myhd'' drive.
> +``myhd'' drive.
I changed it to say "[...] as the backing store of the ``myhd'' drive."
That is, I added the word "of".
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