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[bug #60229] summary: [PATCH] man/groff_tmac.5.man copy edit
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[bug #60229] summary: [PATCH] man/groff_tmac.5.man copy edit |
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Sat, 13 Mar 2021 23:57:36 -0500 (EST) |
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Summary: summary: [PATCH] man/groff_tmac.5.man copy edit
Project: GNU troff
Submitted by: barx
Submitted on: Sat 13 Mar 2021 10:57:34 PM CST
Category: Macro - others
Severity: 2 - Minor
Item Group: Documentation
Status: None
Privacy: Public
Assigned to: None
Open/Closed: Open
Discussion Lock: Any
Planned Release: None
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Details:
There's still plenty of rewriting that could be done in groff_tmac.5.man, but
I believe this patch leaves the file better than it found it.
An attempt at a Branden-style commit log message:
* Correct erroneous reference to PSPIC where PDFPIC was intended.
* (plagiarizing Branden from commit a8f804ff): Say "output driver"
instead of "output device" when referring to postprocessors rather
than the hardware that handles their output.
* (plagiarizing Branden): Stop using "-T" as if it were part of the name
of an output driver. The "-T" option takes the name of an output
driver as an argument; to pretend otherwise is pedagogically unsound.
* Change predictions of mom's future to commentary on her past and
present.
* Remove spaces in .BR parameter lists that were unnecessarily bolding
trailing punctuation.
* Drop unnecessary hyphens ("typesetting" in place of "type-setting,"
"run time" used nonattributively) and add clarifying ones
("colon-separated list").
* Streamline and clarify clunky wording.
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Date: Sat 13 Mar 2021 10:57:34 PM CST Name: groff_tmac.man.patch Size: 12KiB
By: barx
<http://savannah.gnu.org/bugs/download.php?file_id=51056>
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